4/18/2012

Haiku: The Traveler



day trips bloom to bloom
sipping nectar at each stop
sweet memories made


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 19:  Honeybees
Posted by PattiKen
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25 comments:

  1. CYNOSUREApril 18, 2012 at 2:41 PM

    so thoughtful...beautifully penned down... :)

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 18, 2012 at 2:45 PM

    Well, I too went the same route but result is different... well done Patti..

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  3. Rachana ShakyawarApril 18, 2012 at 3:18 PM

    how sweet is to read bloom bloom :)))
    Like it!!

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  4. JaniceApril 18, 2012 at 3:19 PM

    Very nice haiku...love the companion photo as well.

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  5. GraceApril 18, 2012 at 3:25 PM

    Nice perspective from the bee ~

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  6. ElleceeApril 18, 2012 at 5:03 PM

    This haiku is really nice. I love the line "day trips bloom to bloom"

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  7. TigerbriteApril 18, 2012 at 5:06 PM

    What a lovely journey :)

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  8. Susie ClevengerApril 18, 2012 at 5:26 PM

    A beautiful image to accompany your wonderful haiku...

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  9. Sherry Blue SkyApril 18, 2012 at 6:35 PM

    Very beautiful......."sweet memories made."

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  10. GraceApril 18, 2012 at 6:41 PM

    Lovely blooms ~ Nice one ~

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  11. Laurie KolpApril 18, 2012 at 8:32 PM

    Oh, I love this, Patti.

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  12. Brian MillerApril 19, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    some gentle beauty....def sweet mems made....

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  13. Jaideep RaoApril 19, 2012 at 2:01 AM

    last two lines are fantastic. Very nice :)

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  14. PranitaApril 19, 2012 at 5:00 AM

    Love it absolutely..! Sweet memories make a wonderful life..!

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  15. Mohini PuranikApril 19, 2012 at 7:02 AM

    I Loved the concept, sipped the nectar, and sweet memories..

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  16. Tara R.April 19, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    A beautiful, traditional haiku. Well done!

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  17. Sri ValliApril 19, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    Awesome one Patti :)

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  18. susanwritespreciseApril 19, 2012 at 1:26 PM

    Lovely! Very nice.

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  19. carol l mckennaApril 19, 2012 at 2:10 PM

    delightful Patti ~ great one ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  20. TomApril 19, 2012 at 6:22 PM

    classic haiku...love the pic too

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  21. ChevrefeuilleApril 19, 2012 at 7:12 PM

    Wonderfully composed haiku.

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  22. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 19, 2012 at 8:57 PM

    I like these little winged day-trippers!

    About honeybees: “First Light”

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  23. AnonymousApril 19, 2012 at 10:08 PM

    Love "day trips" ... very nicely done! Thank you for your visit to my Day 19 ~~ Treasured Cache

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  24. Mariya KolevaApril 20, 2012 at 5:00 PM

    very true and consise and beautifully-said.

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  25. AnonymousApril 22, 2012 at 6:48 PM

    This is lovely. I like to think of the bees on a day trip. Just gorgeous!

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