4/13/2012

Haiku: Aura of Justice



creeping like night fog
her essence embraces him
revenge in her heart


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 14: Aura
Posted by PattiKen
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16 comments:

  1. GraceApril 13, 2012 at 8:54 PM

    I like your take...justice or revenge in her heart ~

    You are doing beautifully in this form ~

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  2. rallentandaApril 13, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    I like the sight of a woman brandishing a revenge sword:)

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  3. debuApril 14, 2012 at 3:47 AM

    But she looks so gentle !!

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  4. Sri ValliApril 14, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    I can see her two sides through this haiku....Good one :)

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  5. carol l mckennaApril 14, 2012 at 7:59 AM

    powerful ~ emotion haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. Brian MillerApril 14, 2012 at 8:12 AM

    hehe i like the subtle grit in this patti....can you say bobbitt

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  7. Diana TenevaApril 14, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    revenge in her heart - it is so deeply and strongly said!!!

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  8. TigerbriteApril 14, 2012 at 10:00 AM

    Like this one. Reminded me of the Tarot Trump Justice. The power to consider all dispassionately and see through falsehood or ilusion.

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  9. JaniceApril 14, 2012 at 11:02 AM

    Creeping like night fog...oh, that is good. After reading your latest haiku the words "He Had It Comin'" from the song "Cell Block Tango" (Chicago) popped into my head...and will most likely be there all day.

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  10. Ramesh SoodApril 14, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    Interesting.. a unique haiku..

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  11. Mohini PuranikApril 14, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    revenge in her heart...different shades in three lines..beautiful

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  12. Tara R.April 14, 2012 at 5:39 PM

    This gave me the shivers.

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  13. Siggi in Downeast MaineApril 14, 2012 at 7:28 PM

    Wonderful.
    Unique.
    Soul catching.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  14. KizmetApril 14, 2012 at 8:39 PM

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  15. KizmetApril 14, 2012 at 8:40 PM

    loved this! eerie and exciting all in one, this is a great read!

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  16. Gemma WisemanApril 23, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    Disturbing, beautiful drama in this scene!

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