4/16/2012

Haiku: It's No Wonder

1807 Theatre Poster


if they only knew
untold mysteries within
but she’ll never tell


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 17:  Wonder
Posted by PattiKen
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21 comments:

  1. PranitaApril 16, 2012 at 2:51 PM

    Wow... lovely..! The depth of unsaid words...

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 16, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    But then Patti..who will.. this is beautifully done.. a good haiku..

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 16, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    But then Patti..who will.. this is beautifully done.. a good haiku..

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  4. CYNOSUREApril 16, 2012 at 3:09 PM

    sometimes its better to leave some mysteries unfolded...
    beautifully written... :)

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  5. SwetaApril 16, 2012 at 4:07 PM

    That was indeed mystical :-)

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyApril 16, 2012 at 5:18 PM

    Very cool poster......and haiku!

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  7. DaydreamertooApril 16, 2012 at 5:29 PM

    Lovely. Haiku is one of my most fav forms to read. :)

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  8. AnonymousApril 16, 2012 at 7:06 PM

    We suspect, but no....we'll never know. Jut the way of things. This was very well done. Vb

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  9. Adura OjoApril 16, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Mysteries make life interesting...but I'll rather know. Great depth in your well crafted verse, Patti.

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  10. Brian MillerApril 16, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    if only she would tell them you know...smiles.

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  11. kaykualaApril 16, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    Given the present scenario she would tell them, Patti! Promo for any event would be the reason. Great write!

    Hank

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  12. GraceApril 16, 2012 at 9:20 PM

    That is the mystery ~ Nice wonder prompt ~

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  13. JaniceApril 17, 2012 at 12:39 AM

    It's always a good thing, I think, to keep a part of yourself secret, not reveal all.

    You're doing a great job keeping up with your daily haiku challenge, and I love that you always manage to find a perfect picture to go with your work.

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  14. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 17, 2012 at 8:15 AM

    Keep them wondering, I say!

    “The Way Goes On”

    “A Dozen Wonders”

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  15. ChevrefeuilleApril 17, 2012 at 8:39 AM

    Very well written. Love the deeper meaning in this one.

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  16. Sri ValliApril 17, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    Brilliant haiku..yes...she'll never tell

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  17. TigerbriteApril 17, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    All secrets
    locked up in the heart
    lips silent

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  18. carol l mckennaApril 17, 2012 at 2:09 PM

    Love how you used the theme of poster for play and created haiku ~ delightful secrets ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  19. Mr. WalkerApril 17, 2012 at 7:31 PM

    Wonderful poem. It does make me wonder.

    Richard

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  20. AnonymousApril 17, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    Well done ... nice direction!! Thank you for your visit and comment for Day 17 ~~ Answers

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  21. Jeannette,April 17, 2012 at 11:41 PM

    we all have "untold mysteries within"...nice haiku!

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