Artist: Bertram MacKennal
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the warmth that floods me
sent straight from your icy heart
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You'll find my fiction and poetry here. For a taste of non-fiction creative writing and occasional ranting and raving, visit me at
PattiKen and the Muses: Home Away from Home
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PattiKen and the Muses: Home Away from Home
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To see what else the muses are up to, check out "My Other Stuff" on the tab above.
PattiKen
When I'm not in Massachusetts, you can find me following my muses hither and yon, shouting, "Hey, wait up!"
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last line was too intense...too much of message conveyed...lovely thought...great Haiku... :)
ReplyDeleteoy...nice mixing it up...the hot and cold how we usually expect it...evocative piece patti...
ReplyDeletecan be so true ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery striking, especially the last line
ReplyDeleteVery special haiku. Strong emotions, well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
OMG!!! That was intense.. very intense... an excellent take on the prompt! But heart-wrenching at the same time...
ReplyDeleteStrong and powerful line...I like the images contrasting here, hot and cold ~
ReplyDeleteA pleasure to read your writing ~
What strong contrasts here! What wondrous juxtapositions of images!
ReplyDelete“Six Takes on ‘Warmth’”
“Every Farmer Knows”
“The Warmth of Your Breath”
Nice haiku indeed!:)
ReplyDeleteVery powerful.
ReplyDeleteExcellent haiku!
ReplyDelete"sorrow served up hot" - well written
and well finishing line with strong emotions!!!
Very intense and well thought out..
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery in this piece.
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