4/23/2012

Haiku: Bliss



 
unrelenting sun
toes caressed by cooling surf
this is total bliss



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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 24: Bliss.
Posted by PattiKen
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23 comments:

  1. Mohini PuranikApril 23, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    beautifully composed felt it..

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 23, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    I experienced such a bliss.. and found myself there just now.. good one..

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 23, 2012 at 2:42 PM

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  4. SurbhiApril 23, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    ahh... lovely :)

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  5. carol l mckennaApril 23, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    my toes feel the bliss of the ocean ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. Yellow TulipApril 23, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    Stirred my longing for beach... beautiful

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  7. PranitaApril 23, 2012 at 3:44 PM

    Beautiful... :) Your Haiku made me experience some bliss!

    When lessons went astray - A Haiku

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  8. PranitaApril 23, 2012 at 3:44 PM

    Beautiful... :) Your Haiku made me experience some bliss!

    When lessons went astray - A Haiku

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  9. Gemma WisemanApril 23, 2012 at 4:23 PM

    A moment that is refreshing for both body and soul! Lovely!

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  10. JaniceApril 23, 2012 at 5:32 PM

    Wonderful haiku and photo. I, too, love the ocean...the way it makes all my senses come alive and rejuvenates me.

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  11. GraceApril 23, 2012 at 8:38 PM

    I would love to be there ~

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  12. Tarun MazumdarApril 23, 2012 at 10:59 PM

    The beach and the warm wate. bliss...

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  13. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 23, 2012 at 11:33 PM

    This is very thoughtful one!....Wish I could visit a beach very soon :D

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  14. vivinfranceApril 24, 2012 at 2:57 AM

    hmmm, gorgeous - until the sunburn!

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  15. rallentandaApril 24, 2012 at 4:40 AM

    Yes Yes Yes!

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  16. Tarang SinhaApril 24, 2012 at 7:08 AM

    Lovely!:)

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  17. ChevrefeuilleApril 24, 2012 at 7:40 AM

    Awesome! I can relate with the imagery you paint with your words. Thanks!

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  18. Katherine KrigeApril 24, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    I wish I had a hint of that in my world. I could use a little sun, sand & surf. Snow here this am. :(

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  19. Tara R.April 24, 2012 at 12:28 PM

    It is a little slice of heaven.

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  20. Brian MillerApril 24, 2012 at 2:13 PM

    i would not mind sharing in a bit of that bliss...smiles...

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  21. Adura OjoApril 24, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    It is total bliss - the perfect image portrayed.

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  22. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 24, 2012 at 6:34 PM

    A little less sun for me, please!

    Is This Bliss?

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  23. Siggi in Downeast MaineApril 25, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    Perfect bliss...
    been there,
    remember thru your words being there.

    thank you,
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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