4/19/2012

Haiku: Spring Demolition Project




clear picture window
unwelcome wide-angle view
time to “renovate”


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 20:  Renovation

Posted by PattiKen
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20 comments:

  1. Mohini PuranikApril 19, 2012 at 2:36 PM

    time to renovate.. beautiful expression.

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  2. AnonymousApril 19, 2012 at 2:38 PM

    wide angled view LOL!!!

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 19, 2012 at 2:46 PM

    Yes it is... so very interesting..

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  4. UnknownApril 19, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    That cartoon man is answering a "No Win" question. He would be better off with "Pants? What pants?" as he ripped them off her body and tried to carry her off to the bedroom. Of course, when he collapses and falls to the floor with her over his shoulder, he can always blame it on his 'trick knee'.

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyApril 19, 2012 at 5:08 PM

    Ha ha, me too. I need to remove the winter bear fat from my middle.....attending a wedding in August, cannot be this fat!!!!!

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  6. Adura OjoApril 19, 2012 at 5:25 PM

    Interesting angle. I'm forever planning to renovate! Thanks for the humourous take on the prompt.

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  7. GraceApril 19, 2012 at 5:37 PM

    Ha..ha...I like the fun renovation project ~

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  8. Brian MillerApril 19, 2012 at 6:45 PM

    or get a chase vehicle with blinking lights....smiles...

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  9. tigerbriteApril 19, 2012 at 7:52 PM

    Does my bum look big in this ?

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  10. ElleceeApril 19, 2012 at 7:58 PM

    Cute, love this haiku. I am under renovation myself at the moment :-) Thank you.

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  11. carol l mckennaApril 19, 2012 at 8:45 PM

    Fun haiku ~ great! ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  12. kaykualaApril 19, 2012 at 9:26 PM

    Good advice, Patti! But a lady with a gentle disposition is a rave however she appears. Great take, Ma'am!

    Hank

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  13. Katherine KrigeApril 19, 2012 at 10:14 PM

    Yup, perhaps some new blinds? tee hee :0)

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  14. Jaideep RaoApril 20, 2012 at 1:49 AM

    Time to renovate, nice :)

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 20, 2012 at 11:40 AM

    Renovation is in the eyes of the beholder!

    Renovations

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  16. PremaApril 20, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    that was a fun haiku :) brought a smile to my mind imagining a trick mirror at a circus or a carnical !!!

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  17. CYNOSUREApril 20, 2012 at 1:11 PM

    hahaha...lol...good one... :)

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  18. PattiKenApril 20, 2012 at 1:28 PM

    Thanks, everyone. And Hank, you are a true gentleman.

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  19. Sri ValliApril 20, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    Haha funny and true....Lovely haiku :D

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  20. Mariya KolevaApril 20, 2012 at 5:01 PM

    hahaha, and the picture fits perfectly! what a view, indeed.

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