4/22/2012

Haiku: Vamp

Photo source: WikiMedia Commons 


spellbound at a glance 
a promise of things to come 
he is mesmerized 


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 Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 23: Mesmerize.

Posted by PattiKen

15 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodApril 22, 2012 at 2:51 PM

    Who will not.. lovely haiku..Patti..

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  2. Brian MillerApril 22, 2012 at 3:07 PM

    it is def the eyes...smiles...

    three posts in one day...oh my...smiles.

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  3. Mohini PuranikApril 22, 2012 at 3:16 PM

    Really Mesmerizing.

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  4. Mohini PuranikApril 22, 2012 at 3:16 PM

    Really Mesmerizing.

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  5. PranitaApril 22, 2012 at 4:26 PM

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  6. PranitaApril 22, 2012 at 4:27 PM

    A bold haiku..! ;) I sense the capture of her seduction!

    Spellbound, Mesmerized! - A Haiku.

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  7. GraceApril 22, 2012 at 4:38 PM

    Those silent movie actress were something else ~ Nice one ~

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  8. AnonymousApril 22, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    Oh yes. The vamp binding hapless men in her spell. Very cool!

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  9. steveroniApril 22, 2012 at 10:22 PM

    The EYES have it. In real life is the same. The eyes and the soul to which they're attached.

    OR

    The eyes get an AYE from me. (Just trying to be 'cute', Patti!)

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  10. Madeleine Begun KaneApril 23, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    You captured it. Well done!

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  11. Sri ValliApril 23, 2012 at 6:28 AM

    Awesome haiku!
    Sweet escape

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  12. CYNOSUREApril 23, 2012 at 7:47 AM

    awesome one indeed... :)

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  13. TigerbriteApril 23, 2012 at 8:22 AM

    Mmm, the promise described is in those eyes.

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  14. carol l mckennaApril 23, 2012 at 10:02 AM

    Amazing haiku ~ excellent photo ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 23, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    Yes he is, poor soul!

    Mesmerize

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