4/09/2012

Haiku: Climate Change



we once were summer
sunny days and steamy nights
winter cools things down


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 10: Summer
Posted by PattiKen
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18 comments:

  1. moondustwriterApril 9, 2012 at 2:35 PM

    aww but they are still together tho withered and read to blow away
    Hi hope all is well with you and your muse
    hugs

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  2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 9, 2012 at 2:45 PM

    aahh..deep meaning.. :)
    together all time..!! beautifully written.. :)

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  3. CYNOSUREApril 9, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    deep and intense... :)
    lovely haiku... :)

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  4. PranitaApril 9, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    OMG! That was such an innovative thought to the prompt... Loved it absolutely...!

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  5. Brian MillerApril 9, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    i dunno...rub two sticks together long enough and you will at least get smoke...

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  6. SurbhiApril 9, 2012 at 3:52 PM

    beautiful haiku and beautiful picture ... thanks :)

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  7. ElleceeApril 9, 2012 at 3:58 PM

    I really like you haiku and it fits your picture perfectly. Well done.

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  8. Tara R.April 9, 2012 at 7:09 PM

    I really liked this. In the winter you get to snuggle a lot too.

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  9. GraceApril 9, 2012 at 7:43 PM

    You are very fast with the prompt :-)

    I like your take one the summer love...things can cool down in winter ~

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  10. Katherine KrigeApril 9, 2012 at 10:39 PM

    love it Patti! And winter just means cuddling under a whole mess of blankets in front of a roaring fire! Romance doesn't have to ever die.

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyApril 9, 2012 at 11:09 PM

    Oh I love this. I'm so chronically exhausted, the above would be the perfect love affair for me - lots of naps!!!!

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  12. Gemma WisemanApril 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Beautiful layering of description and lower storyline!

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  13. Sri ValliApril 10, 2012 at 1:02 AM

    Beautiful haiku :) Thanks for sharing :)

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  14. ChevrefeuilleApril 10, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    Awesome photo, love those old pictures. Lovely verse on summer. Thank you for being part of this challenge.

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  15. CynthiaApril 10, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    Oh, love this haiku and the
    adorable picture - jus' heaven.

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  16. AnonymousApril 10, 2012 at 9:54 PM

    Lovely Haiku; the photo really adds to your work...beautiful!

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  17. ChristineApril 11, 2012 at 7:04 PM

    a lovely gentle vision...

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  18. PratibhaApril 12, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    I so love this ! :)

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