ebb, flow, to and fro
little seashells leap and twirl
Neptune beams with pride
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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 9: Seashore
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smiles....lovely dance patti
ReplyDeleteI like the movement and pride...very nice ~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful personification in the last line!
ReplyDeleteAnother good one! I love the dance of the ocean, though I admit I never thought of it as a dance...until now. Thanks.
ReplyDeletemagical and lovely feeling come to me from your very creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteah, life's a beach
ReplyDeleteYou haiku paints s picture of a lovely day on the edge of the ocean. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI love it - and am homesick for the sea!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful thoughts woven to haiku :)
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku and companion photo.
ReplyDeleteGood one, that!!!
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ReplyDeleteLove this sea shell dance. It reminded me of Herm island where the beach is made up of tiny shells.
ReplyDeleteThis has a very nice rhythm to it, just like waves.
ReplyDeleteI love the association you have made with dance and the seashore. Well done, loved reading it.
ReplyDeleteI like the movement - and then the last line - as observation of all that movement. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteRichard
nice haiku
ReplyDeletetwo playing senryu