4/08/2012

Haiku: Seashore Dance Recital



ebb, flow, to and fro
little seashells leap and twirl
Neptune beams with pride


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 9: Seashore
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Posted by PattiKen
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17 comments:

  1. Brian MillerApril 8, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    smiles....lovely dance patti

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  2. GraceApril 8, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    I like the movement and pride...very nice ~

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  3. Gemma WisemanApril 8, 2012 at 6:39 PM

    Beautiful personification in the last line!

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  4. JaniceApril 8, 2012 at 7:28 PM

    Another good one! I love the dance of the ocean, though I admit I never thought of it as a dance...until now. Thanks.

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  5. carol l mckennaApril 8, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    magical and lovely feeling come to me from your very creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. TomApril 8, 2012 at 8:28 PM

    ah, life's a beach

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  7. ElleceeApril 8, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    You haiku paints s picture of a lovely day on the edge of the ocean. Nicely done.

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyApril 8, 2012 at 9:16 PM

    I love it - and am homesick for the sea!

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  9. Sri ValliApril 8, 2012 at 10:15 PM

    Beautiful thoughts woven to haiku :)

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  10. Madeleine Begun KaneApril 9, 2012 at 4:26 AM

    Lovely haiku and companion photo.

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  11. Ramesh SoodApril 9, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    Good one, that!!!

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  12. Ramesh SoodApril 9, 2012 at 5:43 AM

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  13. TigerbriteApril 9, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    Love this sea shell dance. It reminded me of Herm island where the beach is made up of tiny shells.

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  14. AnonymousApril 9, 2012 at 10:03 AM

    This has a very nice rhythm to it, just like waves.

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  15. ChevrefeuilleApril 9, 2012 at 6:44 PM

    I love the association you have made with dance and the seashore. Well done, loved reading it.

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  16. Mr. WalkerApril 10, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    I like the movement - and then the last line - as observation of all that movement. Lovely.

    Richard

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  17. AnonymousApril 10, 2012 at 7:52 PM

    nice haiku


    two playing senryu

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