9/01/2012

Castle Keep


 unapproachable

drawbridge up; moat filled with tears

her embattled heart


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Posted by PattiKen
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14 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 1, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    Oh - how melancholy. Hope the embattled heart has the siege broken by friendly forces!

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 1, 2012 at 12:18 PM

    Oh, this is good! Melancholy, but good. I would never have thought of a moat filled with tears surrounding an embattled heart. Strong imagery!

    Drawbridge

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  3. Someone is SpecialSeptember 1, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    This is too good! Melancholy!

    Someone is Special

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  4. Brian MillerSeptember 1, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    def sad...but probably defended for a reason..you know...

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  5. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 1, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    What a fantastic haiku, which tells the entire story in a few well-chosen words. Love the moat filled with tears. We've all been there:)

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  6. TigerbriteSeptember 1, 2012 at 1:04 PM

    I picture a maiden imprisoned in the tower :)

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  7. joanneSeptember 1, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    poor woman...she cried a moatful!

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  8. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 1, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Wonderful story caught in just a few words. A lovely haiku.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2012 at 12:27 AM

    Oh, Patti ... I just LOVE this one!!! Thank you for sharing.

    I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you!

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2012 at 12:27 AM

    Oh, Patti ... I just LOVE this one!!! Thank you for sharing.

    I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you!

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  11. Mariya KolevaSeptember 2, 2012 at 7:04 AM

    How sad...
    Great haiku. Thanks!
    MK

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  12. HazelSeptember 2, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    This brings to mind a damsel in distress. My kind of charm.

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  13. BarbaraSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    the whole story
    economically
    haiku!

    Love it!

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  14. UnspokenSeptember 3, 2012 at 7:57 PM

    I love this one!

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