9/29/2012

Free Verse

(Source: image by Firedrop, WikiMedia Commons)




erase all the lines

coloring outside the box

freedom to be me



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Posted by PattiKen
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24 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 29, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    And there is no finer freedom:) Loved this, Patti.

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  2. Reading PleasureSeptember 29, 2012 at 8:46 PM

    A grand ending.Beautiful, Patti. it's been a joy reading your work.

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  3. GraceSeptember 29, 2012 at 8:54 PM

    Lovely last line ~

    I wish you well Patti ~ Take care ~

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2012 at 9:20 PM

    Very nice, and many thanks for visiting my blog. It's been great writing haiku daily with pictures.

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  5. Christine "Chrissi" L. VillaSeptember 29, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    Nothing like being free to be yourself! Beautiful line :-)

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  6. Brian MillerSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:20 PM

    lines?
    what lines?
    you mean there were lines there?

    smiles.

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  7. rallentandaSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:54 PM

    Probably the most important thing. Thinking outside the box. Thank you Patti for your many visits...much appreciated.

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  8. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    Thinking outside the box that's the way to write haiku. It's such a small verse and you have to use so less words that you have to seek for other words to say it all.
    Wonderful haiku. It was a joy to read your haiku and your nice comments during this haiku journey.

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  9. anthonynorthSeptember 30, 2012 at 3:12 AM

    Great life affirming words.

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  10. SelmaSeptember 30, 2012 at 4:18 AM

    Freedom to be me. Who could ask for anything more? Love this!

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  11. Karin WibergSeptember 30, 2012 at 10:28 AM

    I love that. Great choice of image to go with the haiku. Thanks!

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  12. JaniceSeptember 30, 2012 at 10:39 AM

    Yes! to outside the box. I love this one, Patti; and the abstract water color is the perfect partner to your words.

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  13. BarbaraSeptember 30, 2012 at 11:00 AM

    Ah permission to color outside the lines! I love it. Thanks for sharing your unique and original haiku all month and thanks for visiting me and encouraging my haiku efforts! I've enjoyed the ride!

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  14. Grandmother MarySeptember 30, 2012 at 12:28 PM

    And colorful besides!

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  15. Sri ValliSeptember 30, 2012 at 12:46 PM

    "Freedom to be me"...Small line...but echoes wide meaning!
    Beautiful one!

    Peace in prison

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2012 at 3:02 PM

    erase those limitation!

    its been a pleasure reading your work

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  17. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 30, 2012 at 3:07 PM

    LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! your haiku. We all color outside the box, each in our own way. Love your haiku that says it out loud.

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  18. AnonymousOctober 1, 2012 at 1:13 AM

    Beautiful. Full of meaning.

    Richard

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  19. odyzzOctober 1, 2012 at 1:34 PM

    "to be me " has said it all..loved it

    Was under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge ...
    Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS...being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull's eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world...Loads of special thanks to each one of you...September had been very exciting and a learning month for me...I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure ...Thanks a lot once again...keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly...

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  20. AnonymousOctober 1, 2012 at 2:33 PM

    That is a perfect freedom! It's not fun being places where you feel you have to act like someone other than your true self.

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  21. UnknownOctober 1, 2012 at 4:16 PM

    What a joyful ending! I've enjoyed reading your poems this month! Thanks so much for all your comments!

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  22. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 1, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    What? No lines for you? :)

    Seed-Free Pod

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  23. ghostomOctober 2, 2012 at 12:36 AM

    Thanks, Patti, I've enjoyed your haiku. Nice mingling with you:)

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  24. GerryOctober 5, 2012 at 5:42 PM

    I like the sentiments in this piece.

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