9/08/2012

Lip Gloss


pursed, puckered, pouty
pretty pink plastic promise
piscine playfulness



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Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 9: Gloss

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Posted by PattiKen
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23 comments:

  1. GraceSeptember 8, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    I like all the p words~ plastic promise made me laugh ~

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 8, 2012 at 3:01 PM

    Perfectly placed pure poetry...

    RS:)

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  3. Brian MillerSeptember 8, 2012 at 3:28 PM

    ha...well with all the p's my lips are numb now...smiles....fun patti

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  4. PranitaSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:07 PM

    I totally love this one... considering m a piscean myslf ;)

    Euphoria in music

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:10 PM

    I like the experimentation and playfulness of this

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  6. VinatiSeptember 8, 2012 at 5:00 PM

    Extremely cute! :-)

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  7. ElleceeSeptember 8, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    This is special and a lot of fun. Love it.

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  8. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 8, 2012 at 7:17 PM

    Creative thinking all those P words awesome and so totally gloss ... brought a smile on my face. Thank you for the joy you give with your haiku.

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  9. RallentandaSeptember 8, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    pretty peachy poem possum~!

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  10. UnspokenSeptember 8, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    Why do I wish for a promise like this? And yet, I do!

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 9, 2012 at 1:53 AM

    Definitely alliterative!

    Gloss

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  12. Amrit SinhaSeptember 9, 2012 at 3:29 AM

    Ha ha ... amazingly done !!!

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  13. Sanjana September 9, 2012 at 7:19 AM

    yes this is a special haiku..bravo!!

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  14. HazelSeptember 9, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    Pretty! 'pucker' made me smile. Love your use of piscine.

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  15. SusanSeptember 9, 2012 at 8:56 AM

    I chuckled through this happily rolling in alliteration! It would sell the product, too, up until "piscine playfulness."

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  16. odyzzSeptember 9, 2012 at 9:36 AM

    Wow ..the P-Gloss is great fun...loving it...

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  17. Mariya KolevaSeptember 9, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    Lovely aliteration with all those "p"-words. "plastic promise" is really hilarious. I also love the "piscine" angle :-)

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  18. JaniceSeptember 9, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Your sweet little fish definitely has puckered, pouty lips! This was so cute...

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  19. TigerbriteSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:22 AM

    Great fun :) Nice one.

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  20. UnknownSeptember 9, 2012 at 1:57 PM

    Fantastically playful alliteration

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  21. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    Tongue twisting p's ... great fun!! Thank you for the chuckle!!
    September Heights - Glossy Sheen

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  22. TeresaSeptember 10, 2012 at 1:58 PM

    This is so fun! I love the alliteration.

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  23. Karin WibergSeptember 10, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    Hah! Very funny!

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