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Nureyev with wings
lifting twirling pirouette
nature’s tour de force
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* Entrechat is a ballet move that is performed in the air.
Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 23:
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ReplyDeletenice...was just commenting at another place in the last day about out bush out back that attracts hummingbirds....they are so cool to go sit and watch...amazing...and they have such personality too...nice verse...
ReplyDeleteGreat. Lovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteYou've captured , perfectly, this little bird's astonishing abilities!
ReplyDeleteLove the first line here!
ReplyDeleteGood one :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a unique thought. I really like the comparison. Beautiful picture as well.
ReplyDeletePatti,
ReplyDeleteClassic dance, classic comparison, classy haiku.
Your imagery in words is uplifting (not to mention literate!)
The lines are so lovely and joy.
ReplyDeleteSo like Nureyev, hummingbirds have always amazed me. I loved this haiku and the way your words joined to create a beautiful image in my mind. Nureyev. Hummingbird. Yes. They go together perfectly.
ReplyDeleteA ballet dancer! Patti, your haiku has fascinated me, wow...
ReplyDelete:)
Love the analogy with ballet.
ReplyDeleteFabulous !!!
ReplyDeleteI can't tell you how much I love this, Patti. Leaves me feeling elated!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous! I love the pirouette and nature's tour de force.
ReplyDeleteBrillinat, Nureyev with wings ~ is wonderful. I met hime once when I was a teenager ~ Nureyev that is. I was awestruck!
ReplyDeleteA real force of nature !!!
ReplyDeleteThat is great! Love the ballet analogy!
ReplyDeleteWhat a dancer s/he is!
ReplyDeleteHummingbird Heaven
I love the idea of it being a ballet dancer. Now why didn't I think of that? :)
ReplyDeleteOh this is one lovellllly haiku!
ReplyDeleteThis is really lovely!
ReplyDeleteOh! The hummingbird as a ballet dancer--love it...
ReplyDeleteGreat!
ReplyDeleteImagining hummingbirds as ballet dancers is a wonderful analogy.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteWow, I love this haiku, and the picture, amazing!!
ReplyDeleteThat is such an apt description of the hummingbird! Love it!
ReplyDeleteAmen! And what a great photo ...
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