I have re-written my entry for prompt 6 Milky Way, I think the flow in the cascading haiku is now right, also in the last verse. Thank you for your comment on my Milky Way take.
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Awesome..beautiful..it's so very glittering..
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Beautiful take on the prompt :-)
ReplyDeleteI like the words "she preens" I love the fantasy of it. A very colourful haiku
ReplyDeleteI like this image...stunning mother earth ~ I had a hard time with this prompt, and settled for a closer image ~
ReplyDeletevery nice..i see some astronomy here..like the idea of jewels..good one:)
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Lovely. I am stunned too. I think she's a cat or a grand lady.
ReplyDeleteI like to think of mother earth preening
ReplyDeleteVery nice images, especially diamonds stunning Mother Earth!
ReplyDeletesmiles....very cool...i love to look at the jewels in the night sky and am often awed by its immensity...
ReplyDeleteSo true and so vivid! Yes, I am always stunned to see the Milky Way.
ReplyDeleteGlorious!
ReplyDeleteThe immense nightsky where in the Milky way is a central theme ... glittering of stars like diamonds ... nicely done great haiku.
ReplyDeleteOw, this is just wonderful
ReplyDeleteNice. I especially like "she preens."
ReplyDeleteStunning inspiration!
ReplyDeleteStars like scattered diamonds...nice, Patti.
ReplyDeleteMother Earth is a diva and of course in vogue...
ReplyDeleteAh.. Mother earth.. Beautiful and captivating haiku :-)
ReplyDeleteDiamonds scattered..wow your haiku in itself is a diamond..shining ...
ReplyDeleteThe photos coming back from the Mars explorer are awesome! Nice capture.
ReplyDeleteStars and diamonds :) wow.. a priceless way to capture the milky way.
ReplyDeleteReally liking yours and the use of diamonds
ReplyDelete"Stunning Mother Earth" ... very nice closure. Thank you for your visit.
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Milky Way's Breadth
I have re-written my entry for prompt 6 Milky Way, I think the flow in the cascading haiku is now right, also in the last verse.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment on my Milky Way take.
'aglow in jewels she preen...' is yes, stunning. love it!
ReplyDeleteglamour girl.. I agree completely.. The jewels cannot be matched by any human :)
ReplyDeleteso well done, and unique take on prompt.
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