9/02/2012

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a lone traveler

harking back to happy times

he knows she hears him






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 Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 3: Loneliness
and linked at Poets United Poetry Pantry


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Posted by PattiKen
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26 comments:

  1. Brian MillerSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:00 PM

    or at least he hopes she does....nice...you stir the emo in a few lines...

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:12 PM

    I know she hears them...beautiful..

    RS:)

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  3. Grandmother MarySeptember 2, 2012 at 3:31 PM

    We hiked in the Canadian Rockies and got to do this- fabulous!

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  4. ScarletSeptember 2, 2012 at 4:02 PM

    What a lovely echo ~ I hope she does ~

    Grace

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  5. MarySeptember 2, 2012 at 4:42 PM

    Lots of feeling in these few words.

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  6. TigerbriteSeptember 2, 2012 at 5:13 PM

    Stunning !

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  7. UnknownSeptember 2, 2012 at 5:26 PM

    OOOh, I like to think about the "she" who is hearing him. Fascinating

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  8. DaydreamertooSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    Aww...I'm she she does hear too.
    This is lovely Patti

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  9. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    this entry is unique..lovely representation of loneliness.

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  10. ElleceeSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:36 PM

    This haiku is lovely. I enjoy the thought of being heard this way.

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  11. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 2, 2012 at 7:47 PM

    Patti, this brought me to tears. So lovely!

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  12. BarbaraSeptember 2, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Lovely...just love the last line.

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  13. HazelSeptember 2, 2012 at 10:55 PM

    The last line is such comfort. I see Jacob in that wolf.

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  14. odyzzSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    it touches the chords deep within..lovely

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:41 AM

    this does stir an emotion, nice write

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 3:25 AM

    I love this sound!! :)

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  17. UnknownSeptember 3, 2012 at 5:09 AM

    So primeval...

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  18. Sri ValliSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    Very beautiful one....Hope his voice reach her!!

    Lonely girl

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  19. UnknownSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    So wistful!

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  20. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:18 AM

    I think I hear him too!

    A Long Loneliness

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  21. Reading PleasureSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    lovely words

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  22. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    Awesome verse ... ah! that sound ...

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  23. NAWALSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:06 PM

    he knows she hears him is soooo beautiful wow!

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  24. JaniceSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    I know I've said this before, but I need to say it again...the way you put words together is amazing. I loved this haiku and the accompanying picture. And then that marvelous title. How do you do it!

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  25. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    Lovely and optimistic, this one. And somehow an antidote to loneliness too.

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  26. Siggi in Downeast MaineSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:17 PM

    Great response to prompt.
    Enjoyed it.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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