This is very imaginative and I enjoyed it. That photo of you as a child (I assume) fascinates me. I had a coat like that, but as a child never reached your expression of joy.
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This looks so very spicy..well done.. Patti
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Anything with latin flavor is hot ~
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ReplyDeleteHot latin flavor...hmm..good choice. :)
ReplyDeleteWow latin flavour in your haiku and spicy romance.
ReplyDeleteReally nice you didn't miss a beat, liking it lots
ReplyDeleteSaucy salsa! I like it!
ReplyDeleteThis is very imaginative and I enjoyed it. That photo of you as a child (I assume) fascinates me. I had a coat like that, but as a child never reached your expression of joy.
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ReplyDeleteLove it, feel the heated movements of the dance. Good stuff.
ReplyDeleteYou portrayed hot so well.
ReplyDeleteA great band!
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salsa rhythm pulses red ...loved this line ..quite peppery..
ReplyDeleteReally exotic :-)
ReplyDeleteThat would have been pretty steamy :) Very nice.
ReplyDeleteOw, this is very well written
ReplyDeleteVery interesting and well written :) The image sort of reminded me of a matador.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful spicy haiku!
ReplyDeleteVery good...enjoyed.
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Siggi in Downeast, Maine
My heart is dancing along with the rhythm of this piece!
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