9/16/2012

Field of Dreams


















summer’s end, team gone
cheering voices linger on
“just wait ‘til next year!”


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 Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 17: Meadow

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Posted by PattiKen
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21 comments:

  1. Brian MillerSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:35 PM

    there is always next year...but i cant help the twinge at missed chances this year you know...

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  2. PranitaSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    I can feel the spirit! Very nice.. :)

    Meadows of faith to rescue!

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  3. UnknownSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:40 PM

    I can hear them.

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  4. Ramesh SoodSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    Indeed...till next year..

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  5. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 16, 2012 at 3:18 PM

    Awesome. I loved the movie, too.

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  6. Vinay Leo R.September 16, 2012 at 3:42 PM

    The Peewee League I suppose? :) It'll return, with those talented little players, and the cheering parents and even a few hot-dog vendors maybe. :D

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  7. BarbaraSeptember 16, 2012 at 5:09 PM

    Never give up hope!!!

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  8. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 16, 2012 at 6:06 PM

    Love this haiku. Great one on the take.

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  9. ElleceeSeptember 16, 2012 at 6:23 PM

    Another season ending but hope for next year. I enjoyed this haiku. Brought back memories .

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  10. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 16, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    cheering voices linger on -- wonderful line. wonderful thought that the energy stays. Love it mucho.

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  11. odyzzSeptember 17, 2012 at 2:20 AM

    haiku having lots of positive energy and hope...Great composition...

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  12. HazelSeptember 17, 2012 at 2:23 AM

    Not a terminal goodbye. I love the sense of promise that good days are coming back.

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  13. SayantiniSeptember 17, 2012 at 3:01 AM

    Well-depicted:D

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  14. LocomenteSeptember 17, 2012 at 5:21 AM

    A very different view...
    Loved that take...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/cherished-moments.html

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  15. UnknownSeptember 17, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    "Wait 'til next year." - The anthem of the Cubs fan. No kidding. It's a joke, here in Chicago - WTNY has been said so often it's become a four letter acronym. Little girls are named Whitney by Cub fan parents because it close enough to WTNY for hand grenades.

    Sorry, Red Sox Fans - but we have WTNY patented.

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  16. Reading PleasureSeptember 17, 2012 at 8:55 AM

    Very well crafted

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  17. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 17, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    There's always a next time...until there isn't...

    No Meadow

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  18. JollySeptember 17, 2012 at 9:29 AM

    Lovely, joyful and yet wistful take on the prompt!

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  19. JaniceSeptember 17, 2012 at 10:51 AM

    Always good to keep our hopes up...

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  20. Karin WibergSeptember 17, 2012 at 9:29 PM

    Nice.

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  21. Sara McNultySeptember 17, 2012 at 11:46 PM

    Love your meadow. It is so hopeful.

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