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she awaits his touch
so pregnant with potential
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PattiKen and the Muses: Home Away from Home
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PattiKen
When I'm not in Massachusetts, you can find me following my muses hither and yon, shouting, "Hey, wait up!"
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Awesome...indeed a new verse does come alive...what a potential..here.. Thanks..
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A lot in this one - it works very well - made me stop and think, and very rich metaphors: it creates real tension in me too - awaiting that touch...
ReplyDeleteoo when a touch opens you up like that...just saying...smiles....let the verse spew forth....
ReplyDeleteI like the inspiration...let the new verse come alive ~
ReplyDeleteLots to think about in this one. I love the idea of being touched by potential and the birth of something creative! Your haiku always gives me a new perspective!!
ReplyDeletePS Yes the photo of the sunrise is mine. I have only posted my own photos, so far.
wow.. well done.
ReplyDeleteLove your haiku today. Especially the line "so pregnant with potential" I found your words romantic.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully composed ... every new haiku is a pregnancy ... growing and giving birth to a new verse.
ReplyDeleteLovely word play here ... You really have a great potential :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, very nice great last line
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ReplyDeleteWow Patti, best touch in the whole world, that of your child, the greatest poem a woman can create, lovely!
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new verse comes alive...hope :)
ReplyDeleteWow! Subtle yet distinct. I love the idea of potential and creativity coming out.
ReplyDeleteI can feel the hope and dreams in her heart as she waits to be touched by the one she loves.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku... Lovely use of the prompt.:-)
ReplyDeleteI love the tender and artistic and the mystery in those 3 lines. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteSimply awesome, pregnant with potential ~ I love it!
ReplyDeleteI am looking at the picture, reflecting on your words and trying to bring the two together. Are you tangled in a quagmire of silent words that refuse to be born? I hope that touch comes soon, but suspect that it has already come to pass.
ReplyDeletewonderful, "pregnant with potential," great line.
ReplyDeleteOriginal and creative expression of the reproductive act. Clever!
ReplyDeleteI really like "pregnant with potential" ... very nice!!
ReplyDeleteThese can be interpreted in many ways. Love that line - pregnant with potential. Who's "he"? ;-)
ReplyDeleteWOW. Fantabulous. So full of possibility....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteAt least that's the hope eh?
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