9/19/2012

Road Warrior


 (Source: Astucia)



siren song beckons

would-be Odysseus adrift

safe passage ahead


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Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 18: Lights

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Posted by PattiKen
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16 comments:

  1. BarbaraSeptember 19, 2012 at 6:36 PM

    Hmmm , I'm wondering about those sirens? Need to think on this one a bit! Which is a good thing!!

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  2. DulcinaSeptember 19, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    Different sirens calling Odysseus, very good idea, Patti!
    Road is a dangerous adventure.
    :)

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  3. Brian MillerSeptember 19, 2012 at 10:04 PM

    be careful listening to sirens i tell you....interesting double meaning in that too....

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  4. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 20, 2012 at 12:33 AM

    Whoa! Not only is this one "literary" it's perfectly worded. I AM impressed Patti!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 12:53 AM

    Ha - you've reversed it in a way. Very cool. k.

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  6. kaykualaSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    Sirens that follow you on the road can mean 'pull up'. Best not to speed. Good thoughts Patti!

    Hank

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  7. JollySeptember 20, 2012 at 8:14 AM

    Well-worded and clever! Made me think a bit! Had the siren follow me once :)

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  8. Reading PleasureSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    A finey worded Haiku

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  9. JaniceSeptember 20, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    Very clever...with your use of Sirens/Odyssey. And, once again, the perfect photograph.

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 1:21 PM

    positive note with lovely ending.

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  11. Amrit SinhaSeptember 20, 2012 at 2:10 PM

    Sound of sirens make me wonder !!!

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    Those Sirens are way too tricky to trust!

    Three Lights

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 8:57 PM

    Very nice!!

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  14. UnknownSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:06 PM

    Unique. Love the would-be Odysseus following his own sirens.

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  15. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    amazing.

    join us if you could.

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2012 at 5:05 PM

    Sirens of the road... sounds like the accelerometer to me :-)

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