Love in 160 Bites, Part 1

There was this old dude from Duluth

A bit grozzled and long in the tooth

He looked in the mirror

And shuddered in horror

And thought: when did I lose all my youth?

(To be continued)

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  1. you mean i gotta wait all week?!? smiles...hmm...wonder where you are going?

  2. Photo inspired 160? I like it. Thanks for playing and have a solid Sunday.

  3. Oh it's a mini-series.. I like that!!
    I've been feeling a little like the old dude from Duluth lately only in a woman kinda way!!

  4. I love limericks and this was a good one!

  5. very good one,
    will be waiting to read next part.
    Happy Monday!

  6. Brian: Yup. Sorry. Stay tuned.

    MM: Thanks for visiting.

    Katherine: A mini-series for sure. And I share your empathy with the Old Dude. Like a vampire, I'm avoiding mirrors these days.

    Mary: You're first to mention that it was a limerick. I was thinking I'd not succeeded with that part. Thanks!

    Jingle: Thanks. Stay tuned.

  7. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/24/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-and-more/

    The Celebrate Poet of April Runner-up Award
    two more on the bottom....
    Happy Tuesday!

  8. Reminds me of a lecture by Ram Dass. He held up his age-grizzled hand and said, "Look at this thing. Just look. All wrinkled and aged. If I thought that was me, I'd be horrified."

  9. i dont know what i am doing wrong, i left a comment on this on sunday but its not printed!!! I kind of saw a zombie looking a mirror wondering what had gone wrong...good 160 and looking forward to next part


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