9/10/2010

Silence Lies Broken


silence lies broken
stillness split by falling leaves
summer ends in shards

*******************************
Posted by PattiKen
Labels: , ,

16 comments:

  1. Brian MillerSeptember 10, 2010 at 4:01 PM

    oh very nice patti...love the pick and the simplicity of this one...and i for one am glad...i love fall.

    ReplyDelete
  2. JeffScapeSeptember 10, 2010 at 5:27 PM

    Noooooo! I've not enjoyed my summer yet!

    ReplyDelete
  3. TomSeptember 10, 2010 at 5:31 PM

    yeah, i love fall.

    but i hate what follows.

    ReplyDelete
  4. PattiKenSeptember 10, 2010 at 5:35 PM

    Brian & Tom: I love fall too. It always feels like a new beginning. I think it has something to do with the "back to school" imprints left on my mind years ago.

    Jeff: See, that's the trouble with procrastination. Some things just won't wait. Like summer.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Not For JellyfishSeptember 10, 2010 at 9:46 PM

    I like this picture, how the water looks like broken shards of glass... And the colors of the leaves, reflecting in the water, beautiful.

    ReplyDelete
  6. MahaSeptember 11, 2010 at 5:01 AM

    Beautiful haiku. Gonna read your other entry

    ReplyDelete
  7. Tess KincaidSeptember 11, 2010 at 9:05 AM

    I love the notion of autumn leaves as summer's shards. Nice.

    ReplyDelete
  8. JaniceSeptember 11, 2010 at 9:32 AM

    It's amazing how much can be said with just a few well chosen words. Lovely picture also...

    ReplyDelete
  9. TinaSeptember 11, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    Great haiku. Powerful in so few words. I'm a fall fan myself :-)

    ReplyDelete
  10. UnspokenSeptember 11, 2010 at 6:06 PM

    Sooooo soon!

    ReplyDelete
  11. hvninhellSeptember 12, 2010 at 4:21 PM

    So sadly beautiful, may our souls be soothed by the golden brown blankets of fall.

    ReplyDelete
  12. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2010 at 3:23 AM

    Haiku is my favorite. This is perfect. :)

    ReplyDelete
  13. PattiKenSeptember 14, 2010 at 12:14 AM

    Thank you for your nice comments, Everyone. I'm a big fan of fall. And it is a great time to wander with a camera. Mother Nature uses her best colors to paint fall here in New England.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 14, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    stunning imagery.
    u never fail to amaze!

    ReplyDelete
  15. Mark KerstetterSeptember 5, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    and begins the fiery kaleidoscope of autumn...

    But not yet. I live in the south and don't see this display, but I grew up in the north and autumn was my favorite season.

    ReplyDelete
  16. Chronicles of IllusionsSeptember 7, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Oh wow I love this especially the ending - great poem :)

    ReplyDelete

Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)