4/08/2012

Haiku: Seashore Dance Recital



ebb, flow, to and fro
little seashells leap and twirl
Neptune beams with pride


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 9: Seashore
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18 comments:

  1. I like the movement and pride...very nice ~

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  2. Beautiful personification in the last line!

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  3. Another good one! I love the dance of the ocean, though I admit I never thought of it as a dance...until now. Thanks.

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  4. magical and lovely feeling come to me from your very creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  5. You haiku paints s picture of a lovely day on the edge of the ocean. Nicely done.

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  6. I love it - and am homesick for the sea!

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  8. Love this sea shell dance. It reminded me of Herm island where the beach is made up of tiny shells.

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  9. This has a very nice rhythm to it, just like waves.

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  10. Lovely dance and metaphor, very nice!

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  11. I love the association you have made with dance and the seashore. Well done, loved reading it.

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  12. I like the movement - and then the last line - as observation of all that movement. Lovely.

    Richard

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