"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
smiles....lovely dance patti
I like the movement and pride...very nice ~
Beautiful personification in the last line!
Another good one! I love the dance of the ocean, though I admit I never thought of it as a dance...until now. Thanks.
magical and lovely feeling come to me from your very creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ah, life's a beach
You haiku paints s picture of a lovely day on the edge of the ocean. Nicely done.
I love it - and am homesick for the sea!
Beautiful thoughts woven to haiku :)
Lovely haiku and companion photo.
Good one, that!!!
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Love this sea shell dance. It reminded me of Herm island where the beach is made up of tiny shells.
This has a very nice rhythm to it, just like waves.
Lovely dance and metaphor, very nice!
I love the association you have made with dance and the seashore. Well done, loved reading it.
I like the movement - and then the last line - as observation of all that movement. Lovely.Richard
nice haikutwo playing senryu
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.