4/23/2012

Haiku: Bliss



 
unrelenting sun
toes caressed by cooling surf
this is total bliss



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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 24: Bliss.

24 comments:

  1. beautifully composed felt it..

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  2. I experienced such a bliss.. and found myself there just now.. good one..

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  4. my toes feel the bliss of the ocean ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  5. Stirred my longing for beach... beautiful

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  6. Beautiful... :) Your Haiku made me experience some bliss!

    When lessons went astray - A Haiku

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  7. Beautiful... :) Your Haiku made me experience some bliss!

    When lessons went astray - A Haiku

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  8. A moment that is refreshing for both body and soul! Lovely!

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  9. Wonderful haiku and photo. I, too, love the ocean...the way it makes all my senses come alive and rejuvenates me.

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  10. It would be nice to be on that beach with those blissful feelings. Very nice haiku! :)

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  11. The beach and the warm wate. bliss...

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  12. This is very thoughtful one!....Wish I could visit a beach very soon :D

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  13. hmmm, gorgeous - until the sunburn!

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  14. Awesome! I can relate with the imagery you paint with your words. Thanks!

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  15. I wish I had a hint of that in my world. I could use a little sun, sand & surf. Snow here this am. :(

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  16. It is a little slice of heaven.

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  17. i would not mind sharing in a bit of that bliss...smiles...

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  18. It is total bliss - the perfect image portrayed.

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  19. Perfect bliss...
    been there,
    remember thru your words being there.

    thank you,
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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