unrelenting sun
toes caressed by cooling surf
this is total bliss
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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 24: Bliss.
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24 comments:
beautifully composed felt it..
I experienced such a bliss.. and found myself there just now.. good one..
ahh... lovely :)
my toes feel the bliss of the ocean ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
Stirred my longing for beach... beautiful
Beautiful... :) Your Haiku made me experience some bliss!
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Beautiful... :) Your Haiku made me experience some bliss!
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A moment that is refreshing for both body and soul! Lovely!
Wonderful haiku and photo. I, too, love the ocean...the way it makes all my senses come alive and rejuvenates me.
It would be nice to be on that beach with those blissful feelings. Very nice haiku! :)
I would love to be there ~
The beach and the warm wate. bliss...
This is very thoughtful one!....Wish I could visit a beach very soon :D
hmmm, gorgeous - until the sunburn!
Yes Yes Yes!
Lovely!:)
Awesome! I can relate with the imagery you paint with your words. Thanks!
I wish I had a hint of that in my world. I could use a little sun, sand & surf. Snow here this am. :(
It is a little slice of heaven.
i would not mind sharing in a bit of that bliss...smiles...
It is total bliss - the perfect image portrayed.
A little less sun for me, please!
Is This Bliss?
Perfect bliss...
been there,
remember thru your words being there.
thank you,
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
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