"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
last line was too intense...too much of message conveyed...lovely thought...great Haiku... :)
oy...nice mixing it up...the hot and cold how we usually expect it...evocative piece patti...
can be so true ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
Very striking, especially the last line
Very special haiku. Strong emotions, well written.Thank you.
OMG!!! That was intense.. very intense... an excellent take on the prompt! But heart-wrenching at the same time...
Strong and powerful line...I like the images contrasting here, hot and cold ~ A pleasure to read your writing ~
What strong contrasts here! What wondrous juxtapositions of images!“Six Takes on ‘Warmth’”“Every Farmer Knows”“The Warmth of Your Breath”
Nice haiku indeed!:)
Excellent haiku!"sorrow served up hot" - well writtenand well finishing line with strong emotions!!!
Very intense and well thought out..
Love the imagery in this piece.
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.