4/09/2012

Haiku: Climate Change



we once were summer
sunny days and steamy nights
winter cools things down


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 10: Summer

18 comments:

moondustwriter said...

aww but they are still together tho withered and read to blow away
Hi hope all is well with you and your muse
hugs

S Jayanth said...

aahh..deep meaning.. :)
together all time..!! beautifully written.. :)

CYNOSURE said...

deep and intense... :)
lovely haiku... :)

Pranita said...

OMG! That was such an innovative thought to the prompt... Loved it absolutely...!

Brian Miller said...

i dunno...rub two sticks together long enough and you will at least get smoke...

Surbhi said...

beautiful haiku and beautiful picture ... thanks :)

Ellecee said...

I really like you haiku and it fits your picture perfectly. Well done.

Tara R. said...

I really liked this. In the winter you get to snuggle a lot too.

Grace said...

You are very fast with the prompt :-)

I like your take one the summer love...things can cool down in winter ~

Katherine Krige said...

love it Patti! And winter just means cuddling under a whole mess of blankets in front of a roaring fire! Romance doesn't have to ever die.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh I love this. I'm so chronically exhausted, the above would be the perfect love affair for me - lots of naps!!!!

Gemma Wiseman said...

Beautiful layering of description and lower storyline!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Beautiful haiku :) Thanks for sharing :)

Chevrefeuille said...

Awesome photo, love those old pictures. Lovely verse on summer. Thank you for being part of this challenge.

Cynthia said...

Oh, love this haiku and the
adorable picture - jus' heaven.

John G Evans said...

Lovely Haiku; the photo really adds to your work...beautiful!

Christine said...

a lovely gentle vision...

Nimue said...

I so love this ! :)