"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
so thoughtful...beautifully penned down... :)
Well, I too went the same route but result is different... well done Patti..
how sweet is to read bloom bloom :)))Like it!!
Very nice haiku...love the companion photo as well.
Nice perspective from the bee ~
This haiku is really nice. I love the line "day trips bloom to bloom"
What a lovely journey :)
A beautiful image to accompany your wonderful haiku...
Very beautiful......."sweet memories made."
Lovely blooms ~ Nice one ~
Oh, I love this, Patti.
some gentle beauty....def sweet mems made....
last two lines are fantastic. Very nice :)
Love it absolutely..! Sweet memories make a wonderful life..!
I Loved the concept, sipped the nectar, and sweet memories..
A beautiful, traditional haiku. Well done!
Awesome one Patti :)
Lovely! Very nice.
delightful Patti ~ great one ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
classic haiku...love the pic too
Wonderfully composed haiku.
I like these little winged day-trippers!About honeybees: “First Light”
Love "day trips" ... very nicely done! Thank you for your visit to my Day 19 ~~ Treasured Cache
very true and consise and beautifully-said.
This is lovely. I like to think of the bees on a day trip. Just gorgeous!
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.