4/18/2012

Haiku: The Traveler



day trips bloom to bloom
sipping nectar at each stop
sweet memories made


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 19:  Honeybees

25 comments:

  1. so thoughtful...beautifully penned down... :)

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  2. Well, I too went the same route but result is different... well done Patti..

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  3. how sweet is to read bloom bloom :)))
    Like it!!

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  4. Very nice haiku...love the companion photo as well.

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  5. Nice perspective from the bee ~

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  6. This haiku is really nice. I love the line "day trips bloom to bloom"

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  7. What a lovely journey :)

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  8. A beautiful image to accompany your wonderful haiku...

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  9. Very beautiful......."sweet memories made."

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  10. some gentle beauty....def sweet mems made....

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  11. last two lines are fantastic. Very nice :)

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  12. Love it absolutely..! Sweet memories make a wonderful life..!

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  13. I Loved the concept, sipped the nectar, and sweet memories..

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  14. A beautiful, traditional haiku. Well done!

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  15. delightful Patti ~ great one ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  16. classic haiku...love the pic too

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  17. I like these little winged day-trippers!

    About honeybees: “First Light”

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  18. Love "day trips" ... very nicely done! Thank you for your visit to my Day 19 ~~ Treasured Cache

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  19. very true and consise and beautifully-said.

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  20. This is lovely. I like to think of the bees on a day trip. Just gorgeous!

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