4/16/2012

Haiku: It's No Wonder

1807 Theatre Poster


if they only knew
untold mysteries within
but she’ll never tell


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 17:  Wonder

22 comments:

  1. Wow... lovely..! The depth of unsaid words...

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  2. But then Patti..who will.. this is beautifully done.. a good haiku..

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  3. But then Patti..who will.. this is beautifully done.. a good haiku..

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  4. sometimes its better to leave some mysteries unfolded...
    beautifully written... :)

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  5. That was indeed mystical :-)

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  6. Lovely. Haiku is one of my most fav forms to read. :)

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  7. We suspect, but no....we'll never know. Jut the way of things. This was very well done. Vb

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  8. Mysteries make life interesting...but I'll rather know. Great depth in your well crafted verse, Patti.

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  9. if only she would tell them you know...smiles.

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  10. Given the present scenario she would tell them, Patti! Promo for any event would be the reason. Great write!

    Hank

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  11. That is the mystery ~ Nice wonder prompt ~

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  12. So true, what's within us, only we can truly know. Very meaningful haiku :)

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  13. It's always a good thing, I think, to keep a part of yourself secret, not reveal all.

    You're doing a great job keeping up with your daily haiku challenge, and I love that you always manage to find a perfect picture to go with your work.

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  14. Very well written. Love the deeper meaning in this one.

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  15. Brilliant haiku..yes...she'll never tell

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  16. All secrets
    locked up in the heart
    lips silent

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  17. Love how you used the theme of poster for play and created haiku ~ delightful secrets ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  18. Wonderful poem. It does make me wonder.

    Richard

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  19. Well done ... nice direction!! Thank you for your visit and comment for Day 17 ~~ Answers

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  20. we all have "untold mysteries within"...nice haiku!

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