nary a whisper
no farewell or by your leave
echoes of you fade
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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 29: Echo (poet's choice)
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18 comments:
I like the echoes of the fading whisper...exquisite haiku ~
echoes of you fade ~ well crafted haiku ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
"...and the dish ran away with the spoon."
(Really beautiful second wife ran off with a chef)
Echoes faded to slight vibrations then to whispered nothings!
Patti, HOW do you come up with these perfect haikus?
def rings of loss...and perhaps one not understood...leaving only ripples...
Sad wistful but lovely haiku.
Echoes fading away ... nice imagery, but if the echoe is from a beloved one than it must not fade away. Than we have to cheriss them. And hold tight.
Poignant and powerfully penned.
Can't get better than this, awesome!
That's a really good haiku, but so sad.
might be your best! you say a lot with few words, perfect haiku
Beautiful... so sad.
gentle sadness flows here, but there is a sense of acceptance too that gives heart
Silence can sometimes be deafening.
so deep it is...loved the thought...a great one... :)
Deep and different as usual. Thanks for sharing.
And when the echoes have faded completely, what's left? I think I know...
A haibun, Honey for My Soul
I don't know how I missed this one, Patti! It is awesome ~~ Thank you for the great sharing throughout the month. It's been fun!
I actually think you are very good at writing haiku, Patti. I am impressed because it is a very difficult poetic form. 'Echoes of you fade...' WOW. What a great line!
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