4/12/2012

Haiku: Icy Hot

Artist: Bertram MacKennal
Photo Source: WikiMedia Commons



the warmth that floods me
sent straight from your icy heart
sorrow served up hot


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 13: Warmth

12 comments:

  1. last line was too intense...too much of message conveyed...lovely thought...great Haiku... :)

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  2. oy...nice mixing it up...the hot and cold how we usually expect it...evocative piece patti...

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  3. can be so true ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  4. Very special haiku. Strong emotions, well written.
    Thank you.

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  5. OMG!!! That was intense.. very intense... an excellent take on the prompt! But heart-wrenching at the same time...

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  6. Strong and powerful line...I like the images contrasting here, hot and cold ~

    A pleasure to read your writing ~

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  7. Excellent haiku!

    "sorrow served up hot" - well written
    and well finishing line with strong emotions!!!

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  8. Very intense and well thought out..

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  9. Love the imagery in this piece.

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