tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post2097289080912928078..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: Haiku: Seashore Dance RecitalPattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-37214475083261857162012-04-10T19:52:07.140-04:002012-04-10T19:52:07.140-04:00nice haiku
two playing senryunice haiku<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/04/07/two-playing-senryu/" rel="nofollow">two playing senryu</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-46401524247159554012012-04-10T19:42:00.540-04:002012-04-10T19:42:00.540-04:00I like the movement - and then the last line - as ...I like the movement - and then the last line - as observation of all that movement. Lovely.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-74150676239729534022012-04-09T18:44:25.311-04:002012-04-09T18:44:25.311-04:00I love the association you have made with dance an...I love the association you have made with dance and the seashore. Well done, loved reading it.Chevrefeuillehttp://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/04/haiku-heights-april-challenge-day-9.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-24046502658276305912012-04-09T10:03:47.003-04:002012-04-09T10:03:47.003-04:00This has a very nice rhythm to it, just like waves...This has a very nice rhythm to it, just like waves.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-16810633248923727802012-04-09T08:20:10.698-04:002012-04-09T08:20:10.698-04:00Love this sea shell dance. It reminded me of Herm...Love this sea shell dance. It reminded me of Herm island where the beach is made up of tiny shells.Tigerbritenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-12845095525649909212012-04-09T05:43:22.642-04:002012-04-09T05:43:22.642-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-52636837665724110902012-04-09T05:43:21.870-04:002012-04-09T05:43:21.870-04:00Good one, that!!!Good one, that!!!Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-12902414559106693892012-04-09T04:26:49.110-04:002012-04-09T04:26:49.110-04:00Lovely haiku and companion photo.Lovely haiku and companion photo.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-69454749917316072402012-04-08T22:15:53.673-04:002012-04-08T22:15:53.673-04:00Beautiful thoughts woven to haiku :)Beautiful thoughts woven to haiku :)Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-78259904485466230182012-04-08T21:16:39.716-04:002012-04-08T21:16:39.716-04:00I love it - and am homesick for the sea!I love it - and am homesick for the sea!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-11486056690781561482012-04-08T20:48:49.192-04:002012-04-08T20:48:49.192-04:00You haiku paints s picture of a lovely day on the ...You haiku paints s picture of a lovely day on the edge of the ocean. Nicely done.Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-52751405318187059732012-04-08T20:28:49.503-04:002012-04-08T20:28:49.503-04:00ah, life's a beachah, life's a beachTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-45377910808549030492012-04-08T20:18:21.426-04:002012-04-08T20:18:21.426-04:00magical and lovely feeling come to me from your ve...magical and lovely feeling come to me from your very creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^carol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-51307421460032374892012-04-08T19:28:13.102-04:002012-04-08T19:28:13.102-04:00Another good one! I love the dance of the ocean, t...Another good one! I love the dance of the ocean, though I admit I never thought of it as a dance...until now. Thanks.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-66312215299533564562012-04-08T18:39:05.181-04:002012-04-08T18:39:05.181-04:00Beautiful personification in the last line!Beautiful personification in the last line!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-85363151158912035192012-04-08T17:34:01.948-04:002012-04-08T17:34:01.948-04:00I like the movement and pride...very nice ~I like the movement and pride...very nice ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-74576094574075583872012-04-08T16:56:17.647-04:002012-04-08T16:56:17.647-04:00smiles....lovely dance pattismiles....lovely dance pattiBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com