your “sorry” echoes,
uttered in a barren space
filled with false mercy
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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 7: Forgive.
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10 comments:
i have a hard time with the forgetting part as it opens the door to them doing it again...but i will forgive...nice capture patti
Very beautifully put.. Loved your take on Forgiveness..
Very beautifully put.. Loved your take on Forgiveness..
You'd expression "false mercy" resonates with me. I have seen it but you have named it for me. I enjoyed your haiku.
Nice one. An empty 'sorry' is valueless.
wow that is so powerful!
sweet and powerful... :)
Sounds like some of the students I work with!
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"False mercy" is a powerful complement to "barren spaces".
false mercy -> not a good thing!!!
birth death its all the same
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