4/13/2012

Haiku: Aura of Justice



creeping like night fog
her essence embraces him
revenge in her heart


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Written for Haiku Heights April Heights Challenge - Day 14: Aura

16 comments:

  1. I like your take...justice or revenge in her heart ~

    You are doing beautifully in this form ~

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  2. I like the sight of a woman brandishing a revenge sword:)

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  3. I can see her two sides through this haiku....Good one :)

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  4. powerful ~ emotion haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  5. hehe i like the subtle grit in this patti....can you say bobbitt

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  6. revenge in her heart - it is so deeply and strongly said!!!

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  7. Like this one. Reminded me of the Tarot Trump Justice. The power to consider all dispassionately and see through falsehood or ilusion.

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  8. Creeping like night fog...oh, that is good. After reading your latest haiku the words "He Had It Comin'" from the song "Cell Block Tango" (Chicago) popped into my head...and will most likely be there all day.

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  9. revenge in her heart...different shades in three lines..beautiful

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  10. Wonderful.
    Unique.
    Soul catching.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  12. loved this! eerie and exciting all in one, this is a great read!

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  13. Disturbing, beautiful drama in this scene!

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