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Your point made;
You want control. Well,
Sorry, pal,
Not this gal;
Have control issues myself.
So just fu… kiss off.
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This was written for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads (IGWRT). Sunday’s challenge was to write a shadorma, using one of several excellent extreme close-up photographs posted on IGWRT. Another new poetic form for me, a shadorma is an unrhymed, six-line poem with a syllabic rhyme scheme of 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables per line.
You're going to drag me kicking and screaming into other forms, aren't you.
ReplyDeleteOkay. Tomorrow.
I like yours a lot - it's so ... expressive. :)
Read...my...lips!
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ReplyDeleteFrom title to last . you had me laughing...hey I like short writings.
Should try them sometime--grin!
CHARMING, Patti
PEACE!
OMG..ha...ha...I think you need to try other poetry forms so we can read more stuff like these ~
ReplyDeleteThis is a powerful "small" poem. Line 5 cracked me up.
ReplyDeleteExcellent.
There is strength in this!
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ReplyDeleteYes, yes, yes!
ReplyDeleteha you had me at the title....and then showing your control in that last line...smiles....
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ReplyDeleteSometimes the form forces ...er, control. Hilarious ! Thanks for sharing.
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