(Painting: Untitled by Raoul Dufy)
After shoving everyday clutter
beneath the bed,
stashing laundry in the closet
behind the stair,
leaving Mexican take-out menus to
stew in a pan,
she carefully slipped into a cool
scented bath and
away from her boring reality she swam.
In the glow of a festive
flickering candle and
the frosty margarita she held in
her hand,
she rode sweet salty waves to exotic
far lands
where laughter played like a boistrous
band
and humdrum one-notes could ne'er
be found.
if only to escape, just for a bit! i could really see this :)
ReplyDeleteNow, that laundry stashed away behind the stairs: own up: was that done or not done ? Oh forget it - go back to the boisterous band in your bath :-)
ReplyDeleteyes, that is the bath experience my wife describes that I can never obtain.
ReplyDeleteahh...shoving "everyday clutter" away and slipping into that remedial bath. I want to be her right now!
ReplyDeleteI see I'm not the only one to indulge in bathroom escapes ;)
ReplyDeleteI love the "mexican take out menus" stewing in a pan - way to get her message across! hee hee.
ReplyDeletehaha....i def dont mind a bath...and a margarita....its the new calgon take me away...smiles...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Sherry..I love the "Mexican take out menus stewing in a pan. What a wonderful escape..Where's my bubble bath? :)
ReplyDeleteA little escape, now and then, is a very good thing. Yes, I'll have another margarita, please.
ReplyDeleteIf we all get into that tub it'll be crowded indeed! In the first 3-lines, I thought she was preparing for guests, and then came that well-planned bath with candle and drink and all, and I realized she was the guest and out-of-sight = out-of-mind. I love her choice of boisterous, this is not necessarily to chill out, it is a major get-away. Lovely! but stewed menus? I'll bet it's being delivered.
ReplyDeleteHow nice to have a respite a little a time. A little day dream and a nice little bath. We deserve a break, yes!
ReplyDeleteHank
I like the rhythm and the joy in this. It's like a dance with castanets. Ole!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed...like i was there.....loved it...
ReplyDeleteThis sounds really lovely:
ReplyDelete"slipped into a cool scented bath and
away from her boring reality she swam"
Olé! indeed!
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to escape for a while, even if it's only to the bathroom... lol
Very nice, fun read Patti
Nice...I too would like to have this bath or swim to my dreams ~
ReplyDeleteand later, rekindled the escape in the flame of a pen :-)
ReplyDeleteI want to go!
ReplyDeleteI want to go... Love this !
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this. I'd guess the margarita helped. LOL.
ReplyDeleteMaybe we should all sit in a hot tub???
Love this in its entirety. Boy, do I ever love shoving things under my bed. Yes, metaphorically, that is.
ReplyDelete"She" is one smart lady! This is a happy post, starting with the image. BTW, I read your comment to my husband...made him happy!
ReplyDeleteI want to go--grin! WAIT! I've BEEN.
ReplyDeleteWe each have our own escape route, mine was on two wheels, back home in a few days...all I found was Peace, a new (for me) form of prayer, awareness of so much, so many, so every......stopped and smelled, ya know? (Is that ALL?!!)
PEACE, Friend!
Nice to read you again.
And I L O V E the Dufy painting
realllyyyy loved this!!!
ReplyDeleteOh, I loved this poem...And I could definetely relate to it too...Total bliss...Sweet escape...I love it.
ReplyDeleteI just wish my bath was big enough to bury my knees so I could sip a salt tipped margarita....I'll have to wait for summer and languish in the pool.
ReplyDeleteHow did you know that was what I was doing, lol...
ReplyDeleteThis was wonderful! So well written, I loved the imaginary and how you guided us! Bravo~
Nothing like a little escape. ☺
ReplyDeleteAnd isn't she making the best choices?!
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