8/12/2012

Soul

(Painting by Morris Louis, 1959)

ephemeral one
the force behind my heartbeat
my love, my life, you


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Written for Haiku Heights
and
by special request:
Haiku Friday

Posted by PattiKen
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19 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 12, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    So lovely. Wonderful to have someone who means so much.

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  2. Brian MillerAugust 12, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    smiles...love the sentiments in your verse...i can not see the image and i even refreshed a couple times...but i def think it must be of someone special by your verse...

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  3. SelmaAugust 12, 2012 at 9:46 PM

    This is so beautiful. It is so well written there is really nothing I can say about it. I just want to feel it and savour it. Thank you, Patti!

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  4. UnknownAugust 12, 2012 at 10:01 PM

    Patti, beautiful Haiku, Morris louis painting perfect with it. kp

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  5. Sri ValliAugust 13, 2012 at 5:00 AM

    Very beautiful dedication to that special person

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  6. AnonymousAugust 13, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    lovingly written.. enjoyed this

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  7. LocomenteAugust 13, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    If there was no love...
    We writers would never have born

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  8. GraceAugust 13, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Beautiful words of love ~ And the image is perfect too ~

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  9. PranitaAugust 13, 2012 at 11:15 AM

    How Romantic! Very nice Patti!


    Bathing under the twilight

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  10. Grandmother MaryAugust 13, 2012 at 1:14 PM

    Takes time and effort to build that- well done!

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  11. G-ManAugust 14, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    Wow Patticake, someone sure is lucky...:-)

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  12. JaniceAugust 14, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    Mmmm...powerfully put together.

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  13. SusanAugust 14, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    Very much enjoyed this--says so much in very few words. Thank you for visiting mine, too.

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  14. Sankara Jayanth SAugust 14, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    beautiful and romantic..nice haiku.. :)

    ...

    Scented and Musical Soul
    Jump First, If You Want To Fly
    Finishing Line Light Years Far

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  15. Vaishali JainAugust 15, 2012 at 12:25 AM

    Awww how lovely! Romantic! :)

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  16. kaykualaAugust 15, 2012 at 6:51 AM

    Great to be appreciated, Patti!

    Hank

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  17. Kathy ReedAugust 15, 2012 at 8:56 PM

    Ahhh..soul mates ;)

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  18. UnknownAugust 17, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    OMG I love this. Link in to Haiku Friday PLEASE?

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  19. UnknownAugust 17, 2012 at 2:24 PM

    I love this. I am still speechless.
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
    hugs
    shakira

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