4/03/2010

Friday Flash 55 - Mojo's Mysterious Misadventures

I've already posted my entry in G-man's Friday Flash 55, but how could I resist the challenge to join in Mojo's Mysterious Misadventures?

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Mojo's words:

The platform was empty except for the two of them. He felt himself helpless in the swirling currents of her smoky eyes.

"Careful, you could drown."

They had so very much in common it seemed he'd known her his entire life.

Oddly, he never felt the impact of the train, only the shove.

"Call me"

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And mine:

Shove. Shove! 

"Are you ever going to get up?"

Shove. 

"The lawn needs mowing. How many times do I have to ask you??? Get up!”

Shove! 

He pulled the pillow over his head and tried to block out his wife’s shrill voice. If she would just leave him alone, drowning happily in those smoky eyes.

7 comments:

  1. I have been there,
    beautiful 55.

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  2. I wondered if anybody'd come up with a dream sequence. Sounds like this guy might prefer the train.

    Great stuff!

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  3. Ji: Thank you!

    Mojo: Thanks. Chalk it up to too much television.

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  4. ha. nicely done....i really dont want to mow...

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  5. I would like to wish you and your family
    Many Easter Blessings and have you a great Easter!
    hugs
    shakira

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