springtime ends too soon
summer heat before its time
humidity swells
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Written for Haiku Friday, hosted by LouCeeL.
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When I'm not in Massachusetts, you can find me following my muses hither and yon, shouting, "Hey, wait up!"
winter, my earth-hell
ReplyDeleteMay? Well, who does not like spring
summer's heat I love
(Is punctuation legitimate in haiku?)
we dont quite have that heat...which is good cause i been tearing down fences again today...killed a copperhead too...
ReplyDeletei'm in the desert, we have what most people consider summer heat right now
ReplyDeletewhen time races like a bullet
zongrik, don't you dessert dwellers always says, "yeah, but it's a dry heat..."? I guess it's the difference between a sauna and an oven. Either way, it's still too much for me.
ReplyDeleteI KNOW. Here, too. Then it went cool again.
ReplyDeleteThe image of the humidity swelling is such an apt one because it suggests something that creeps up on you just as humidity does. We get shocking humidity in Sydney (sometimes close to 100%) and there is nothing to be done about it but glisten ( I was told at school that ladies don't sweat, they glisten. Haha.)
ReplyDeleteExcellent haiku!
I know I'm not looking forward to our Florida humidity.
ReplyDeleteHello mate nice bloog
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