12/13/2010

I Am


I am passion
Kindled with suggestion
Ignited by desire.

I am conception
Formed by combustion
Building toward completion.

I am creation
Delivering new hope
Packaged as love.

I am you.

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This is my offering for One Shot Wednesday.


Posted by PattiKen
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26 comments:

  1. Dulçe ♥December 14, 2010 at 3:53 PM

    YOU! ARE GREAT... and those words came into my heart just as your purpose was

    Loved this Patti!!

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  2. Grandmother MaryDecember 14, 2010 at 6:08 PM

    It's what happens. Creation delivers new hope packaged as love in the opinion that the world should go on and there we are! You write beautifully, Patti. Happy Holidays to you and your family.

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  3. Brian MillerDecember 14, 2010 at 6:21 PM

    smiles. i could use a bit of that...can you pass some over...

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  4. 00dozoDecember 14, 2010 at 6:47 PM

    You certainly have a way with words. This was fabulous! Great pic choice, too!

    (now, if Christine O'Donnell was as half as clever as you are with words, she might have gotten a few more votes ... ;-)

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  5. AnonymousDecember 14, 2010 at 7:56 PM

    Perfect - so simple.

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  6. G-ManDecember 14, 2010 at 8:29 PM

    Patti-Cake...
    You Am Awesome!!

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  7. moondustwriterDecember 14, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    I'm thinking an explosive combo

    nicely worded sequence of events

    nicely aimed at One Shot

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  8. Katherine KrigeDecember 14, 2010 at 10:45 PM

    I am reading
    your words & the comments
    wanting to love this,
    I am

    I am trying
    today I am stretching,
    but this not my favourite of yours
    I fear.

    I will be back though, as your quality always strikes me, even when it is not my fav
    Katherine

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  9. signed...bkmDecember 15, 2010 at 12:06 AM

    "I am passion" wow I love that line...passion it is us all...why we live, it is our conception....you have ignited my thinking Patti...thank you...bkm

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  10. KavitaDecember 15, 2010 at 2:04 AM

    Oh.. what a beauty! I love the progression in the poem!
    From passion to conception to creation... very beautifully done, Patti!
    I am impressed! :)

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  11. joannaDecember 15, 2010 at 2:40 AM

    The ending is powerful and spiritual -- very wise words,

    joanny

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  12. Kerry O'ConnorDecember 15, 2010 at 4:41 AM

    This is a very beautiful ice crystal of a poem. All the emotions so powerfully stated in so few words.

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  13. Gabriela AbaloDecember 15, 2010 at 5:10 AM

    Powerful piece!

    Great writing :)

    cheers

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  14. gautami tripathyDecember 15, 2010 at 10:14 AM

    It is so beautifully expressed. Its simplicity enhances it.

    places

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  15. drybottomgirlDecember 15, 2010 at 11:19 AM

    Beautiful!!!!

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  16. BubbaDecember 15, 2010 at 1:23 PM

    Nice One Shot!

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  17. Desert RoseDecember 15, 2010 at 1:48 PM

    I am you.

    that sums it all Patti.right to my heart it goes..:)
    EPIC..!

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  18. Steve IsaakDecember 15, 2010 at 3:48 PM

    I accurately guessed what the end-stanza was going to be (no, that's not a criticism, I just read A LOT of poetry), and I still enjoyed the journey to it. Good writing.

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  19. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 15, 2010 at 4:07 PM

    Beautiful, strong and affirming of all that is good. Well done!

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  20. KBDecember 15, 2010 at 9:01 PM

    We're aall wonderful, let's have a party!

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  21. AnonymousDecember 16, 2010 at 12:24 AM

    Loved the poem and the picture.

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  22. dustusDecember 16, 2010 at 1:22 PM

    Great write, Patti. Literally echoes the very lines in being kindled with suggestion, concept, and creative intent.

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  23. PattiKenDecember 16, 2010 at 5:39 PM

    Everyone, thanks for your visit and comments. I love seeing you all here. And I'' second KB's comment. We're all wonderful, so let's party!

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  24. AnonymousDecember 21, 2010 at 1:48 AM

    This is beautiful, Patti. To me, it's so very romantic on one level, and profoundly spiritual on another. I love it. :)

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  25. JamieDedesDecember 21, 2010 at 12:02 PM

    Simply beautiful, Patti, both poem and photo. Nice work.

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  26. AnonymousDecember 22, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    A lovely and generous verse-- nicely done! I'm reading further, but won't comment again as it is just maddening to jump through the sign-in hoops, sorry.

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