9/08/2012

Lip Gloss


pursed, puckered, pouty
pretty pink plastic promise
piscine playfulness



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Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 9: Gloss

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23 comments:

  1. I like all the p words~ plastic promise made me laugh ~

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  2. Perfectly placed pure poetry...

    RS:)

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  3. ha...well with all the p's my lips are numb now...smiles....fun patti

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  4. I totally love this one... considering m a piscean myslf ;)

    Euphoria in music

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  5. I like the experimentation and playfulness of this

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  6. This is special and a lot of fun. Love it.

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  7. Creative thinking all those P words awesome and so totally gloss ... brought a smile on my face. Thank you for the joy you give with your haiku.

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  8. pretty peachy poem possum~!

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  9. Why do I wish for a promise like this? And yet, I do!

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  10. yes this is a special haiku..bravo!!

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  11. Pretty! 'pucker' made me smile. Love your use of piscine.

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  12. I chuckled through this happily rolling in alliteration! It would sell the product, too, up until "piscine playfulness."

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  13. Wow ..the P-Gloss is great fun...loving it...

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  14. Lovely aliteration with all those "p"-words. "plastic promise" is really hilarious. I also love the "piscine" angle :-)

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  15. Your sweet little fish definitely has puckered, pouty lips! This was so cute...

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  16. Great fun :) Nice one.

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  17. Fantastically playful alliteration

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  18. Tongue twisting p's ... great fun!! Thank you for the chuckle!!
    September Heights - Glossy Sheen

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  19. This is so fun! I love the alliteration.

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