9/02/2012

Un-Packed

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a lone traveler

harking back to happy times

he knows she hears him






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 Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 3: Loneliness
and linked at Poets United Poetry Pantry


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26 comments:

  1. or at least he hopes she does....nice...you stir the emo in a few lines...

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  2. I know she hears them...beautiful..

    RS:)

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  3. We hiked in the Canadian Rockies and got to do this- fabulous!

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  4. What a lovely echo ~ I hope she does ~

    Grace

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  5. Lots of feeling in these few words.

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  6. OOOh, I like to think about the "she" who is hearing him. Fascinating

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  7. Aww...I'm she she does hear too.
    This is lovely Patti

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  8. this entry is unique..lovely representation of loneliness.

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  9. This haiku is lovely. I enjoy the thought of being heard this way.

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  10. Patti, this brought me to tears. So lovely!

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  11. Lovely...just love the last line.

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  12. The last line is such comfort. I see Jacob in that wolf.

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  13. it touches the chords deep within..lovely

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  14. this does stir an emotion, nice write

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  15. Very beautiful one....Hope his voice reach her!!

    Lonely girl

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  16. lovely words

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  17. he knows she hears him is soooo beautiful wow!

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  18. I know I've said this before, but I need to say it again...the way you put words together is amazing. I loved this haiku and the accompanying picture. And then that marvelous title. How do you do it!

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  19. Lovely and optimistic, this one. And somehow an antidote to loneliness too.

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  20. Great response to prompt.
    Enjoyed it.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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