"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
Awesome...indeed a new verse does come alive...what a potential..here.. Thanks..RS:)
A lot in this one - it works very well - made me stop and think, and very rich metaphors: it creates real tension in me too - awaiting that touch...
oo when a touch opens you up like that...just saying...smiles....let the verse spew forth....
I like the inspiration...let the new verse come alive ~
Lots to think about in this one. I love the idea of being touched by potential and the birth of something creative! Your haiku always gives me a new perspective!! PS Yes the photo of the sunrise is mine. I have only posted my own photos, so far.
wow.. well done.
Love your haiku today. Especially the line "so pregnant with potential" I found your words romantic.
Wonderfully composed ... every new haiku is a pregnancy ... growing and giving birth to a new verse.
Lovely word play here ... You really have a great potential :-)
Oh, very nice great last line
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Wow Patti, best touch in the whole world, that of your child, the greatest poem a woman can create, lovely!(Sorry for deleting my previous comment):)
new verse comes alive...hope :)
Wow! Subtle yet distinct. I love the idea of potential and creativity coming out.
I can feel the hope and dreams in her heart as she waits to be touched by the one she loves.
Beautiful haiku... Lovely use of the prompt.:-)
I love the tender and artistic and the mystery in those 3 lines. Wonderful.
Simply awesome, pregnant with potential ~ I love it!
I am looking at the picture, reflecting on your words and trying to bring the two together. Are you tangled in a quagmire of silent words that refuse to be born? I hope that touch comes soon, but suspect that it has already come to pass.
wonderful, "pregnant with potential," great line.
Original and creative expression of the reproductive act. Clever!
I really like "pregnant with potential" ... very nice!!
These can be interpreted in many ways. Love that line - pregnant with potential. Who's "he"? ;-)
WOW. Fantabulous. So full of possibility....
At least that's the hope eh?
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.