"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
so does mine...very restful image!hugs xoxo
Heartbreaking and infuriating.
World keeps moving on with such pictures emerging anew everyday...A great haiku Patti...RS
And you read those footsteps loud and clear for us!
dang...this has a great build to it patti...those second two lines in particulr...you give it a face...
Yes, oppression hurts, we have no idea how much. Your haiku gives us a hint.
Very powerful words, Patti! Well done.
It's a pity when we know it's man-made. To destroy is easy but recovery will be tough. Nicely Patti!Hank
So does mine. I love the art on the second line very much.
The photo speaks pain, your haiku puts words to a bitter fate. So well done, kiddo!
Travesties wherever we turn. A lovely post, Patti.
Muddy boots - such a powerful image - connects emotion to images to meaning. Great!
muddy boots across my heart....heartbreaking and emotional..
These are painful footprints!
Sad childhood as expressed by the pic. On the other hand I think that other pic of that gorgeous ditzy kid may be you:)
What a compelling photo and haiku. Could well be a landai poem. Have you tried you hand at landai?http://allahdeen.blogspot.co.nz/2012/09/landai.html
powerful . . .simply stated . . . just what a haiku should be.
Very strong haiku ... strong words accompanied with a photo with so much pain in it.Namaste
Good take on the prompt. Outside the norm.
Very well said, Patti. A strong statement, indeed. Loved this!
Reading your words makes me feel stomped on. So I guess you succeeded with this reader!Footprint
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.