"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
I like all the p words~ plastic promise made me laugh ~
Perfectly placed pure poetry...RS:)
ha...well with all the p's my lips are numb now...smiles....fun patti
I totally love this one... considering m a piscean myslf ;)Euphoria in music
I like the experimentation and playfulness of this
Extremely cute! :-)
This is special and a lot of fun. Love it.
Creative thinking all those P words awesome and so totally gloss ... brought a smile on my face. Thank you for the joy you give with your haiku.
pretty peachy poem possum~!
Why do I wish for a promise like this? And yet, I do!
Ha ha ... amazingly done !!!
yes this is a special haiku..bravo!!
Pretty! 'pucker' made me smile. Love your use of piscine.
I chuckled through this happily rolling in alliteration! It would sell the product, too, up until "piscine playfulness."
Wow ..the P-Gloss is great fun...loving it...
Lovely aliteration with all those "p"-words. "plastic promise" is really hilarious. I also love the "piscine" angle :-)
Your sweet little fish definitely has puckered, pouty lips! This was so cute...
Great fun :) Nice one.
Fantastically playful alliteration
Tongue twisting p's ... great fun!! Thank you for the chuckle!!September Heights - Glossy Sheen
This is so fun! I love the alliteration.
Hah! Very funny!
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