"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
Oh - how melancholy. Hope the embattled heart has the siege broken by friendly forces!
Oh, this is good! Melancholy, but good. I would never have thought of a moat filled with tears surrounding an embattled heart. Strong imagery!Drawbridge
This is too good! Melancholy!Someone is Special
def sad...but probably defended for a reason..you know...
What a fantastic haiku, which tells the entire story in a few well-chosen words. Love the moat filled with tears. We've all been there:)
I picture a maiden imprisoned in the tower :)
poor woman...she cried a moatful!
Wonderful story caught in just a few words. A lovely haiku.
Oh, Patti ... I just LOVE this one!!! Thank you for sharing. I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you!
How sad...Great haiku. Thanks!MK
This brings to mind a damsel in distress. My kind of charm.
the whole storyeconomicallyhaiku!Love it!
I love this one!
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.