9/01/2012

Castle Keep


 unapproachable

drawbridge up; moat filled with tears

her embattled heart


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14 comments:

  1. Oh - how melancholy. Hope the embattled heart has the siege broken by friendly forces!

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  2. Oh, this is good! Melancholy, but good. I would never have thought of a moat filled with tears surrounding an embattled heart. Strong imagery!

    Drawbridge

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  3. This is too good! Melancholy!

    Someone is Special

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  4. def sad...but probably defended for a reason..you know...

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  5. What a fantastic haiku, which tells the entire story in a few well-chosen words. Love the moat filled with tears. We've all been there:)

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  6. I picture a maiden imprisoned in the tower :)

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  7. poor woman...she cried a moatful!

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  8. Wonderful story caught in just a few words. A lovely haiku.

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  9. Oh, Patti ... I just LOVE this one!!! Thank you for sharing.

    I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you!

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  10. Oh, Patti ... I just LOVE this one!!! Thank you for sharing.

    I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you!

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  11. This brings to mind a damsel in distress. My kind of charm.

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  12. the whole story
    economically
    haiku!

    Love it!

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