9/19/2012

Road Warrior


 (Source: Astucia)



siren song beckons

would-be Odysseus adrift

safe passage ahead


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Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 18: Lights

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16 comments:

  1. Hmmm , I'm wondering about those sirens? Need to think on this one a bit! Which is a good thing!!

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  2. Different sirens calling Odysseus, very good idea, Patti!
    Road is a dangerous adventure.
    :)

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  3. be careful listening to sirens i tell you....interesting double meaning in that too....

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  4. Whoa! Not only is this one "literary" it's perfectly worded. I AM impressed Patti!

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  5. Ha - you've reversed it in a way. Very cool. k.

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  6. Sirens that follow you on the road can mean 'pull up'. Best not to speed. Good thoughts Patti!

    Hank

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  7. Well-worded and clever! Made me think a bit! Had the siren follow me once :)

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  8. A finey worded Haiku

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  9. Very clever...with your use of Sirens/Odyssey. And, once again, the perfect photograph.

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  10. positive note with lovely ending.

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  11. Unique. Love the would-be Odysseus following his own sirens.

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  12. Sirens of the road... sounds like the accelerometer to me :-)

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