9/16/2012

Field of Dreams


















summer’s end, team gone

cheering voices linger on

“just wait ‘til next year!”


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 Written for Haiku Heights - September Heights Day 17: Meadow

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21 comments:

  1. there is always next year...but i cant help the twinge at missed chances this year you know...

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  2. The Peewee League I suppose? :) It'll return, with those talented little players, and the cheering parents and even a few hot-dog vendors maybe. :D

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  3. Love this haiku. Great one on the take.

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  4. Another season ending but hope for next year. I enjoyed this haiku. Brought back memories .

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  5. cheering voices linger on -- wonderful line. wonderful thought that the energy stays. Love it mucho.

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  6. haiku having lots of positive energy and hope...Great composition...

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  7. Not a terminal goodbye. I love the sense of promise that good days are coming back.

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  8. A very different view...
    Loved that take...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/cherished-moments.html

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  9. "Wait 'til next year." - The anthem of the Cubs fan. No kidding. It's a joke, here in Chicago - WTNY has been said so often it's become a four letter acronym. Little girls are named Whitney by Cub fan parents because it close enough to WTNY for hand grenades.

    Sorry, Red Sox Fans - but we have WTNY patented.

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  10. Very well crafted

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  11. Lovely, joyful and yet wistful take on the prompt!

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  12. Always good to keep our hopes up...

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