5/27/2011

Just Desserts?


As Marsha answered the doorbell, that song from West Side Story ran through her mind, “Something's coming, come on in…

Life with John had been horrible, but she was finally rid of him. Now, Marsha had the feeling that something really exciting was coming. 

The cop at the door said, “Marsha Smith?  You’re under arrest.”
 
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This was written for Mr. Knowitall's Friday Flash 55.  It's a continuation of a story posted last week, Rump Roast, Well Done.

18 comments:

  1. "...feeling that something really exciting was coming." Yup. A long term relationship with a female person with tattoos and the instincts of a man.

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  2. eeek! haha Lceel...

    perhaps she should change the doorbell to "18 and life"

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  3. Uhhhh....I guess that's exciting. Great 55.

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  4. That might be a little too exciting.

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  5. Messed with Marsha one time too many!

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  6. ...Because once your a Jet, your a Jet all the way, from your first cigarette to your last dying day!!!

    Patti...?
    Perfect in Every Way!

    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  7. I see she took the quick solution. nice one.

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  8. What a great twist, Patti! John messed with the wrong woman apparently. :)

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  9. wow all that in 55... really great !!

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  10. Ha! I went back to read Rump Roast first. That was not the kind of excitement she was hoping for I bet.

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  11. Uh-oh. You created such suspense with so few words. I wonder what happened next....

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  12. Chuckle! Another goodie. Thanks for the smile.

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  13. She were feelin' stabby, she were...

    Excellent follow-up to Rump Roast!

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