5/27/2011

Just Desserts?


As Marsha answered the doorbell, that song from West Side Story ran through her mind, “Something's coming, come on in…”

Life with John had been horrible, but she was finally rid of him. Now, Marsha had the feeling that something really exciting was coming. 

The cop at the door said, “Marsha Smith?  You’re under arrest.”
 
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This was written for Mr. Knowitall's Friday Flash 55.  It's a continuation of a story posted last week, Rump Roast, Well Done.

Posted by PattiKen
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17 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 27, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    "...feeling that something really exciting was coming." Yup. A long term relationship with a female person with tattoos and the instincts of a man.

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyMay 27, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Wowzers, good one!!!!

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  3. Brian MillerMay 27, 2011 at 1:46 PM

    eeek! haha Lceel...

    perhaps she should change the doorbell to "18 and life"

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  4. AnonymousMay 27, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    Oooops, bad Marsha.

    Here's mine: Friday Flash 55 ~ Doing Time

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  5. Monkey ManMay 27, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    Uhhhh....I guess that's exciting. Great 55.

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  6. Alice AudreyMay 27, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    That might be a little too exciting.

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  7. Grandmother MaryMay 27, 2011 at 5:06 PM

    Messed with Marsha one time too many!

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  8. G-ManMay 27, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    ...Because once your a Jet, your a Jet all the way, from your first cigarette to your last dying day!!!

    Patti...?
    Perfect in Every Way!

    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  9. anthonynorthMay 27, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    I see she took the quick solution. nice one.

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  10. TALONMay 27, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    What a great twist, Patti! John messed with the wrong woman apparently. :)

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  11. JeffScapeMay 28, 2011 at 4:02 AM

    Autobiography?

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  12. JL DodgeMay 29, 2011 at 8:25 PM

    wow all that in 55... really great !!

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  13. Katherine KrigeMay 29, 2011 at 11:33 PM

    Ha! I went back to read Rump Roast first. That was not the kind of excitement she was hoping for I bet.

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  14. gautami tripathyMay 30, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    What a 55! Loved the ending...

    jingling chains

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  15. AnonymousMay 30, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    Uh-oh. You created such suspense with so few words. I wonder what happened next....

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  16. JamieDedesMay 30, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    Chuckle! Another goodie. Thanks for the smile.

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  17. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    She were feelin' stabby, she were...

    Excellent follow-up to Rump Roast!

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