8/27/2012

The Vitriolic Vagina

Photo By Jaime Clark

Your point made;
You want control. Well,
Sorry, pal,
Not this gal;
Have control issues myself.
So just fu… kiss off.

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This was written for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads (IGWRT). Sunday’s challenge was to write a shadorma, using one of several excellent extreme close-up photographs posted on IGWRT. Another new poetic form for me, a shadorma is an unrhymed, six-line poem with a syllabic rhyme scheme of 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables per line.

22 comments:

  1. You're going to drag me kicking and screaming into other forms, aren't you.

    Okay. Tomorrow.

    I like yours a lot - it's so ... expressive. :)

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  2. You had me at the title! SO hilarious!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. "Mommy, what is vagina?"

    From title to last . you had me laughing...hey I like short writings.
    Should try them sometime--grin!
    CHARMING, Patti
    PEACE!

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  4. OMG..ha...ha...I think you need to try other poetry forms so we can read more stuff like these ~

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  5. This is a powerful "small" poem. Line 5 cracked me up.

    Excellent.

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  6. You really lured me in with that title. This is great, Patti.

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  7. ha you had me at the title....and then showing your control in that last line...smiles....

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  8. Sometimes the form forces ...er, control. Hilarious ! Thanks for sharing.

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  9. OMG this is wonderful! I laughed right out loud... thank you for a wonderful gift.

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  10. Your title surprised me...I didn't know what to expect!! Ha ha!

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  11. Saw the title and had to visit. Glad I did!

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  12. What fun! Your sense of humor shines through.

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  13. Wondering at first what the title was all about. A short write-up makes it all the more fun. Chuckles! Nicely Patti!

    Hank

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  14. The title made me snort. Loved the empowerment in this piece.

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  15. From title to last line, this is a gem! It's another "Vagina Monologue"!

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